I'm a terrible human being

. Alright... I have about 100 lines of poetry (yes, my morbid poem is becoming almost as long as a short story). The only thing that bothers me is that I'm getting more sloppy with the wording. I think once I'm done with the whole piece I will be able to go back and edit here and there to tweak it, so that really shouldn't be an issue. Anyway, as much as I've been working on this poem (way, way more than I'd planned), I sure hope people enjoy it. If I could ever create a book of poetry, I'd surely add this piece.
Clubs I am in!

Devious Comments
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
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Im the Juggernaut,Bitch
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
Check my gallery! [link]
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Im the Juggernaut,Bitch
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
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in my mind they are playing.
Songs to soothe the body and mind.
Simple pleasures to remind.
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Im the Juggernaut,Bitch
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Mason: Monotony is the mind-killer.
Shadowlands
*writerskeystone !ThePeoplesPen
~da-library *MedievalCommunity
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
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~Shadowss-stock | *Shadowcat-Arts
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~Shadowss-stock | *Shadowcat-Arts
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
Check my gallery! [link]
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
Check my gallery! [link]
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I don't know what my problem is, but I bet it's hard to pronounce.
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
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i like photoshop layers tho and because of the ability to redo a part without messing up another using digital styles. on paper if theres alot of details involved, i'll probably mess something up TT....
oh yes....*goes to fav your gallery*
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~Dreams are meant to be lived~
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
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~Dreams are meant to be lived~
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
Check my gallery! [link]
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~Time is the train we wish to jump from when love has us under its spell~ Alben Silverberg
Check my gallery! [link]
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Innocence looks good on you...
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